All Comments on 'A New Beginning'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Awesome!

Nice Story! Loved it, short, but romantic and kinda poetic. Your very talented!

SegamiSegamiabout 13 years ago
Very interesting story...

I would like to see a part 2. It doesn't seem as if this is the end of their 'romance' and a finale to both eroticism and emotion would be great; as well as what happens in their future(marriage, life as bikers, settling down, he gets killed and now she's the gang's property, she leaves him, too, etc.).

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