by Melody
I liked it because I have been in a similar situation with such a woman described. My tastes run to long and lean, but in the presence of a voluptuos, wanton lady, you cannot hold back. Unlike the little china dolls that break, you can unleash your lust and strength on such a woman. You and she both want and need it that way.
I could leave a story length comment on all the comments people have made about rape stories. Come to think of it, I'll just have to write something about it.
I thought this was a fun, sexy little story. I saw it as roleplaying, not as an honest to god rape. And I didn't miss the part where she hesitates at the start of his spanking her, and he nods to reasure that he will stop if she asks him to.
I read it as a kinky game of, ohhhh, pretend to make me do things I shouldn't want to, and I'll pretend to fight.
Safe, sane, consensual fun between two adults who obviously had a great time.
Whoops, sorry so long, just wanted to make those points.
Keep writing, I'll keep reading and voting!
Great little fantasy!Certainly got me going!
Nice work!