All Comments on 'Ghost'

by Balaak

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Well done mix of emotions, reality, fantasy...

...!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wow

enjoyed it throughly!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
preganant

i hope she got preganant

Mistress_AlexiannaMistress_Alexiannaabout 19 years ago
A-freakin-mazing!!!

I hope there is more to this story!!! I would love to see what happens afterwards.. Pregnancy, or even more ghosts popping out of the woodwork. This was great!

SabledrakeSabledrakeabout 19 years ago
Wow!

Very hot and nicely done. Thanks for the read.

OneHornyGuyOneHornyGuyabout 19 years ago
MORE

More please! a Chapter 2 pregnancy would be awsome.

turtledoveturtledoveabout 19 years ago
WOW!

That was FANTASTIC-please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
incredible!

wow! i have to have more! that was really really fantastic!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Loved It!!!!!!!

This is right up there with the best of the best. I'd love to read more like this one, so please, please, please, keep the stories coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Delicious.

The story had me gasping. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Oh Please More!!

Wonderful absouletly wonderful! Please you have to write more about this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
More please

Excellent. What did she do next?

Did she take her husband? How did he react to how wet she was?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
More please

I am dying to know what happens next. Please let us know.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Hot

Very nicely done! really enjoyed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Whimsy

Wow- I don't usually read this catagory, just chose this on a whim and now I am so glad that I did! Makes me wish I had a ghost of my own! Loved the way you let us know just what she was thinking. Fluctuating between guilt and the lure of being fucked by someone/thing so sensual. Really loved this!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
5

to offset the asshole anony who rates everything a 1

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Love it

Don't listen to the arse about cheating, they can go fuck themselves. Love the story keep them coming. :-) And your writing style is great.

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