All Comments on 'Doctor or Master'

I loved this story!!!

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Ladies, imagine this: You are a convicted prisoner, and have just entered our prison system. I am the prison doctor and I am preparing my instruments, my back is to you. Without looking at you, I order you to remove your clothes.

As you do, you see that besides the 'normal' stethoscope, thermometer, speculum, and other medical instruments, I am laying out handcuffs, a blindfold, and several lengths of rope. You quickly disrobe, not wanting to be punished (more?)

Does this interest you?

- -Playdoc1964b@yahoo.com

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Is there going to be a second part to this? I am so horny from reading that story. I just have to know how its going to end???!!!

for god's sake, they're not nibbles they're nipples.

I liked the story, but due to the spelling of some words and such, it was hard to know what you were talking about at times. You may want to have someone proof read and edit before you submit. Keep up the writing!

Nibbles? good grief!

check your work, its hard to read and that makes it unenjoyable

there is no need to be mean about it

Are you actually old enough to know anything about sex? Somehow, I doubt you've had much experience. I thought the first time that it was a typo, but apparently you actually think there is a body part called a 'nibble.' This story was more of a turn off than turn on.

No need to be nasty cunts about it.

........but is English your first language? You really need to proof read your stuff and check your punctuation.

Having said that, the content is good, but more detail, emotion and background ate needed.

I hope to help your writing, not put you off. Good luck :)

You need an editor, Nibbles . . .Bwitch . . .

great beginning , please write more