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Poem for a whore

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by LibraLynn04/28/06

WOW!!!

This poem is awesome. It was like you were saying what I hope a friend says to himself before he goes home to his significant other.

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by twelveoone02/23/11

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if the rest made an attempt, and allowing for the fact that you do want contrast, a 4
Now she snores like a human
lies like a woman
dreams like a girl.
These are the parts I want
but cannot buy.
Cannot take.

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by erectus12301/03/13

lovely poem

very nice erotic and tender

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