All Comments on 'Poem for a whore'

This poem is awesome. It was like you were saying what I hope a friend says to himself before he goes home to his significant other.

if the rest made an attempt, and allowing for the fact that you do want contrast, a 4

Now she snores like a human

lies like a woman

dreams like a girl.

These are the parts I want

but cannot buy.

Cannot take.

very nice erotic and tender

Not Valkryie!