All Comments on 'Lady Fortune's Smile'

Very erotic. Loved the story line and the leather references! Keep up the great work!

God DAMN, baby! 'Member what you said to me 'bout S.C.? Well, I don't share any walls with neighbors, but still, I think we're even now, Mal! *shaking head to clear it*

"...Lady Fortune seems to be on the rag as of late..." I really loved this line. I'd kick your ass and take it from you, like a school yard bully, if I thought it would work.

*kisses* from an admirer,

Tom

Very hot and good, you are an excellent writer, would love to hear more about these two rommies.

This is definately one of the better gay male stories I read. The dirty talk was nice without over doing it with likeable characters as well.

I enjoyed reading this...I hope you write more. This couple was hot, though I would have liked to read about some role reversal and Travis getting bent over the couch too.

This was one rock hard story. I loved it! Keep on writing!

I didn't expect to like this, but did - it works.

Super hot story. Loved it! Would love to see more of it!

I wondered what category I stumbled on to it, but really enjoyed it. Loved the depreciating humour of Theo's, we really got to know his thoughts, frustrations and feelings for travis, well done

Absolutely loved it. Great job!

...real, believable and very hot and sexy. I'm a fan of your work.

Beautiful story. It's hard to find a really well written story that combines emotions with hot, hardcore sex. Good erotica should be both.