All Comments on 'Do Miracles Happen? Ch. 04'

by Rabbitrunner91

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JDsellerJDsellerabout 19 years ago
You just keep blowing me away!!!!

It is enjoyable to read a well written story. You have your characters reacting in real life situations. We all know that we react incorrectly at times in front of our children. I love how you handled the arguement and the make up. This story is adictive. So I am hooked. Keep my fix coming as fast as possible.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
superb

i love it. i check every day for the new installment. keep it coming!

sexmatesexmateabout 19 years ago
It has been a pleasure to read this!

My only bitch is that it's long enough! HA! This is a genuinely moving story that is definately tugging on my heart! What an uplifting experiance! I await my next chapter!

Thanks!

Sexmate

H20waderH20waderabout 19 years ago
I like it

It is good.Having been rasied by a widowed mother, social security can be a help. But you are cool. I like the non-erotic side of the site.

I liked the farmer too and where is the ending to the stranded tale and when will you start another one? LOL

keep them coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Another Thank You -

Ah, Rabbitrunner - - - Many in this world get high from pharmaceuticals, adult beverages, and assorted mind-bending stimuli. You have developed a new form of addiction called your stories. Waterwalker, Sexmate, JDSeller and I, the humble prof, are obviously hooked bigtime on the stories you create. Thank you for chapter four. I am all smiles and perhaps a bit teary, mostly perhaps because I feel you are illustrating the good that permeates the bulk of the human race, but is not often heard about. Write on, good sir, we all await your next installment.

Prof. Ramstein

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wonderful

I love the story. It is completely unrealistic but it is great reading. In the real world ,unfortunatly , you just do not run into altruistic, loving successful doctors who take on an entire family and support them financially and emotionally without demanding something in return.I wish such a world existed, but, alas, it only exists in fiction. Keep on writing, please. 60 year old George

Softly WhispersSoftly Whispersabout 19 years ago
Very well done. I am enjoyiing this.

And yes, it's non-erotic and yes, it's sweet and tender and well written, (a few verb tense errors now and again) and yes, I puzzle why you would put such a delicate work on here but I'm glad I found it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
The fight came at just the right time

to show no one is perfect and to show just what their priorities are.

Good job.

bruce22bruce22over 8 years ago
That was not quite what I expected

The Family hug was great but in my opinion there should have been a bit more tension before the resolution. Strictly speaking i have never had someone organize my "things", but my daughters are champing at the bit to get me organized.

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