All Comments on 'Life'

very deep, made me think...and kind of metaphorical...the life of a relationship begins here....but also actual life...as in the creation of a child starts with these things as well....were you thinking of both when you wrote this piece?? it's great...can't wait to see what you have for us next! :)

very touching poem, very thought provoking...

The greatest love truly has the ability to make one feel reborn.

very sensual read

good flow....made me think ...

i dont like it as much as the first poem... but there were some parts that really made me smile

"When bodies collide"

i liked that =)

*HUGS*

My life started with the love of my life! More truth to your poem than most realize.