All Comments on 'Knights of the Old Republic'

More please - this was go fucking hot!!

Slight innaccuracies in the character's bios but still good, it can be written off to artistic freedom. Keep it up, it was pretty hot. And if there is any plausible, realistic way to connect these characters to the ones from KotOR I then please do so, though I expect it will be many chapters from now, that is ok.

one of the best stories i've read. lets see somemore.

Really nice story -- well written.

I'd love to see more. Visas Marr might be quite interesting to write -- since she doesn't see (well, not with her eyes, anyway) it would be exciting to describe any eroticism from her other senses -- what does she smell? taste? hear? feel? Just an idea, anyway.

Wow, it's hard 2 type wit just 1 hand.

Never got to this part in KOTOR2...

This was an incredible writing. It had the detail enough to let people who haven't played the game know what's going on. And it was concise enough for those who have to not get bored. Great use of the characters. Using your own main character wouldn't have allowed anyone to relate to him.

The actual description of the sex was very good. Please do not hesitate to write more. I would like to see the Handmaiden, Visas...and I know it may be a bit out of date, but a story of the first KotOR with Bastilla would be highly appreciated. Again, great job.

OK that was just awsome. If they included that in the game they'd certaily get my vote for game of the year.

Man i sure hope they put something like this in kotor 3 and how fortunate to find a story about one of my favorite games as well

I would like to say - Finally a great erotic KOTOR story! There not many around and I was glad to find this one! Nicely done - indeed! :D

We certainly need more KOTOR II stories! With Brianna and Visas and Mira and Twin Suns and Luxa and Atris and Handmaidens! And we certainly need some KOTOR I babes stories as well - I mean Mission, Juhani, Bastila and Yuthura are just begging for it! ;)

brilliant work...hope to read more soon...

im guessing i know what the third one is.... if you look at the paragraph when atton is standing up to confont Mira, and then look at the last paragraph from visas point of view its obvious the exile is fucking Brianna/Handmaiden.

I liked the story....sex was HOT!! well done

lol. im such a lore geek i could help but read this and think "the Hawk cameras are in the Nav room, not on the Bridge. and what the hell are they going to Taris when it was flattened