Reminded me of my situation a few months ago minus the happy ending. Enjoyed this story very much though; allowed me to dream. Thank you. Very sweet.
I had no idea how you were going to pull off such a tough subject. I was pleasantly surprised.It was a feel good story with a happy ending. Thumbs-up.
he definately had some balls to say that to her uncle! that was too funny!
Having read this already, it tickles me that he stood up and took a butt whooping to Prove that he loved her and was willing to fight her family for her. We need more Real men like this NOW!
Very good ending. He did have balls though-GIANT ONES-good thing the uncle didn't carry his gun or Tarynn would be a widow before she was a bride!
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