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Black Eye Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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Hmmmm

Reminded me of my situation a few months ago minus the happy ending. Enjoyed this story very much though; allowed me to dream. Thank you. Very sweet.

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by mrskelley07/05/08

Great Story

LOL...great writing!

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by Anonymous10/03/08

Great Story

I had no idea how you were going to pull off such a tough subject. I was pleasantly surprised.It was a feel good story with a happy ending. Thumbs-up.

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by lili8201/15/11

ha ha!

he definately had some balls to say that to her uncle! that was too funny!

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by THELOVELY1GLO02/09/11

Again

Having read this already, it tickles me that he stood up and took a butt whooping to Prove that he loved her and was willing to fight her family for her. We need more Real men like this NOW!

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by Anonymous05/09/11

I liked it

Very good ending. He did have balls though-GIANT ONES-good thing the uncle didn't carry his gun or Tarynn would be a widow before she was a bride!

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