This is strange, infectious, I like
This sold it
"I surmise we
wait to savor
of verse and style"
and great flow. i have to agree with twelvone even though the first two stanzaa carry just as much weight in my eyes. strictly to the eye of the poet however. nice job
Your Poem was mentioned on the thread
"New Poems Reviews"
thanks for the journey
on current events. Last stanza is perfect. Always look forward to seeing your words.
I like your writing... it's always sharp, not one word too many or out of place.
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