by GratefulFred
Fine wierdness. I identify completely.
I'd have given it a perfect score if you hadn't typed "their" for "there" in Chapter 1.
-Z.
I never realized that zen and conusor are so intertwined, I read this story cause the offering was a zen tale like no other, but what I see is a conusor of porn/ technical and zen being the total focus and one set mind to search. Not what I was expecting but then again in zen, no expectations no disappointments (~_~)Now if you want zen? in the poetry forum ~~ zen mountain~ <grin>