All Comments on 'Wet Miranda's Birthday Surprise'

great story , lucky bloke

At least this time Tom wasn't made an unwitting cockold by his girlfriend and his so called friends, and Miranda even showed something approaching caring for him for once. Nice change, not that I expect it to last for any length of time.

Now all of us men feel we've never had a real birthday!--Great story! I loved it!

Julie and Miranda, will you organise my birthday party, please? :-)

Another excellent story Miranda! You did it again...always delivering a highly erotic story. Kudos to you!

I have to agree with the fellow who suggested that you should organize his next birthday party. Maybe I can talk my girlfriend and subbie, lilsubslut, into your organizing MY next birthday party!

Keep up the excellent work, and keep the stories coming!

What a great story! I was hard the whole way through. Very exciting.

My God what a hot tale! And to think I have more of your stories yet to be read. Thank you for keeping my dick up at attention.

Wow. One of the hottest stories I've ever read. I would like to have a girlfriend like you.

Personally, the actual fantasy involved is not really much of a turn-on, nor is the clichéd blonde, but nevertheless the story is very well-written and crafted.

Not sure about how appetising the cake sounded though:

"I came downstairs to greet the guys and take the cake out of the oven. It looked great; it was chocolate cake with a thick butter-cream frosting."

She may have thought it looked great but I doubt it very much, given the likely results of putting a cake in the oven with the butter-cream icing (frosting) already on! This unappetising image aside, the images you evoked were attractive.

Miranda and Julie used all the wiles of women to make me very jealous of Tom's birthday! Where are these gifts on my birthday? I thought the story was well thought out! I think tour. I think your writing will only get better although no ones complaining about fhis story!

I would love that gift for my birthday! My wife and her sister. That would be awesome.

Well done, Wet Miranda, for making grumpy Tom - that's how he seemed at the beginning - into a lucky winner. Hope he appreciates you and will be less curmudgeonly...I'm sure he will after that treat, about which I enjoyed reading.

Very hot. Wet Miranda made a lot of people wet with that birthday surprise. Mmmm.

Perfect birthday gift.

so hot! cant wait to hear more stories!

Would love a birthday present like that!!!! XXX

Good story but some really poor use of some words. Yes, I'm picky like that.

A birthday gift to remember, well played

Great! How do I get an invite to the next one? Seriously though, this is written very well. I enjoyed the pacing and the climax (as it were) was excellent.

Just want to comment on your Pen Name. 'Wet' is good. I love it that my wife's vagina is always wet and ready to go. No need for messy lubes. I presume that this is how you got your nickname?

Great tale!

(similar to Anonymous above, about his wife's wet vagina)

My wife's cunt is perpetually wet and slick, also. Presumably that's how Wet Miranda named herself. Any cunt is a good cunt, but a wet one is best of all. Wife found that out when between marriages and before she met me, she frequented Plato's Retreat in New York City. Once inside, she stripped off, got down on her knees with arse in the air, and was ready to take on any number of cocks, wiithout even seeing the face of the owners. Hundreds each visit. That was years ago, before AIDS. Now still very wet and ready.

Wonderful