All Comments on 'At The Bar Ch. 02'

Before I read this story, I read the original. Both are extremely well done, articulate, and erotic. It's been too long between episodes, young lady. Don't make us wait that long again.

You did a great job with the story. i hope you keep up the good work and keep writing i do enjoy your stories:)

raw sensual erotica at it's best

Don't leave us hanging write (more) chapters this was great both chapters!!!

how did she leave her house when she left her car at the bar

How'd she get back to the bar to pick up her car?

I liked the way that you wrote about how they were going at each other but you left out how did she leave the house where they were. Her car was at the bar and I thought that it ended to fast. I thought that maybe when she came out of the bedroom in her robe that she had a strap on dildo inside of her robe. Just wishful thinking on my part.

Still waiting for more. As ever. Betsey

How did she get home she rode over in the other girls car

That's a good question. How did she get home? Called a cab maybe? I'd be pissed if my lover didn't take me back to get my car.

Wow, if only :-)

Thank you for a sizzling two-part story. I especially luvved how the intensity built up to a marvellous crescendo. Your writing is so good that at times I felt like I was one of the voyeurs in the car park leering at these two hot women!

Way more of this please. Awesome!