All Comments on 'Becoming Bi Ch. 01'

for what I hope will be a series of MM/FF/MFMF encounters. Keep going!

i loved your story. i wish there were more bi mmf stories written. mmmmm

Cool story and I dig the topic but as this is an erotica site I don't think some writing critiques are out of order.

You mention that "Steve' sucked you off in the bathroom. Then you say you've never done anything with a guy. And then you say you did play around before. Those are the kind of little slip up's that are, for this reader at least, a distraction and takes me out of a story. Hope you keep them coming though.