Not the kind of thing one expects to read on here, but I liked this a lot. You write dialogue very very well - I'll have to check out more of your things. Nice work! =)
It's good to know that the teacher got his due payment in the end.
having just read 'The Kiss', I can see that the first part of this story is an excerpt from that novel. Very well-written; I'm not complaining, I'm just observing. ;) I'm now going through your other work. Thanks for the great read.
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