All Comments on 'For R.'

have an R in my life...who ispires me...but in a different way...this , a touching warm sigh for a past whispered moment ...left in the mind of a dreamer...beautiful...blue

Nice contrasts here... filled with emotions... seems to be the thing.. Muses floating in and out.. untouchable except for the pen flowing on parchment...nice write..ty

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and charged emotions. Beautiful work! Thank you. LJ

This is a very nice line: "And I want to pour words all around you like sunshine,"

Some really wonderful phrases here, willow: "count your petals" etc. This has great potential!

A flawless flow of suppressed emotions. Amazing!

Your poem could be tailor made for My "R" as the lines, "And I want to pour words all around you like sunshine, but I clip my heart short" struck home in a deep way. Held and unspoken feelings will be the death of Me yet. Thank you for the wake up call with this poem, Willow

crafted verse. Emotions shine here. I loved it!

beautiful and exquisite. I love how you expressed this. Thank you

With such simple words used here, torn emotions are revealed.

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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