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Anything For The Company Ch. 02

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by English Lady04/03/05

Loved your first line..

I adore your opening paragraph, the humour is fantastic, unfortunately the rest of the story isn't as zingy. I enjoyed it but felt it missed a bit of the originality you found in your opening sentances.

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by Anonymous04/03/05

Meets or exceeds...

Your usual high standards. Had no problem visualizing the entire scene in detail.

You reall DO love to fuck, and it shows!

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by Anonymous04/03/05

A Good Piece

You developed the story line nicely and set the scenes from the start in a way that allowed visualization without the burden of too much description. It was a very pleasing change from some of the other pieces I read today. The character's interest in buying and inspecting the costume allowed for a natural detailed description where I've seen others awkwardly try to fit such detail into the middle of a steamy scene. The only odd phrasing I saw (and it may be a common term elsewhere) was the description of a cock that "sprung up and down" instead of bobbing.

Thank you for the pleasure of your writing. I'll be looking for more of your work.

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by Anonymous04/15/05

More, PLEASE

More, More This is great stuff!

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by Anonymous08/10/06

Awesome!!!

Hot and Sexy!! From start to finish, I was captured!! Mmmmh, leaves you wanting more!!Fantastic!!

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