by opels
The description of the fight etc. was splendid, I, don't know what you'll do, (I would like a happy end like the Lord of the manor..)
John
this is a great little compilation and i love waiting for the next installment! keep writing!
You can't end it like this make a happy ending! I hate sad endings they just depress the crap out of me.
I will give you this, you are extremely talented, especially in the field of suspense. Please write again soon. You're killing me!
I've been reading thru all of your stories, and quite enjoy them. This one has kept me pulled in since the first chapter! You're a great writer. The only thing that bothers me is that everything is very rushed. You went thru 2 months in this one page. I would like to see things in a bit more detail! Otherwise very well done