All Comments on 'Denial'

but I'm iffy about that first line. The rest of the stanza is quite good.

going to leave a comment but the critic in me ...

is in denial~ (wouldn't that be me?) <grin>

loved the poem...

that first line.

I love the first verse

This is a great poem TT..it's great to see you back.

These two verses really hit home with me.

~as truth becomes blurred by need

loss is transformed into gain

yet emptiness still fills one's heart

despite trying to wash it clean

with a flood of tears

Three thousand miles

between two realities

I carry one in each hand

which one I open depends

where I think I'm headed ~

That's just truth, plain and simple

excellent poem

welcome back

Where did you come from tt2u? Blazed in with this one. I enjoyed the language throughout. That close is excellent,

Great to see you back writing, tung!

A well-written and clever piece.

Fly

to my little corner of the universe. I should probably tell you, I am the queen here.

Syn

Very well done! ~Imp

Sophomoric at best

A chuckle in those first two lines so perfectly describing that odd state.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.

----------