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and very well thought out, nice poem~

A nice piece of Adam, Eve, and creation;

The original tale must have been dreamed up by a man;

Ask any woman how she'd feel about centuries of giving birth.

The story of Adam and Eve retold.

AT first I was a bit confused with the double load of Adam, but then my mind was put at ease when I realized it was innocent, just needing to put more hours at the office. Remember, according to this creation, as soon as Eve makes her début out of Adam’s rib, her first concern is the lack of appropriate variety of her apparel (or something to that effect). I had to laugh at the tremendous amount of creative liberties (though I have to admit that I kind of a missed the apple and the snake!). Reminded me more than a little of the Flintstones.

and how it all began..Nicely done.