All Comments on 'Waiting Out the Ice Storm'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
The premise of the story was very good

I really liked the idea of the story. But it really tailed off in the end. It was almost as if you were in a hurry to write it. Still, it was ok.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
More please

Actually it was better than 75, but not 100. Id like to see a ch 2 on this and expand into anal.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Almost

There was a lot of time building up to him deflowering the virgin girl, and in less than a paragraph it's over and done with...

I kinda feel like the end was rushed just to call it done. Not even a "to be continued" to give a hope of more to come.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I hope that Sarah dumps his cheating arse and espouses Megan.

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