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Front Lawn Butt Sex

byKillerMuffin©
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by Anonymous

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by 03/28/04

I even chuckled

Now this story was fun, realistic enough and with good repartee between the characters. There were a few laughs too. A fine effort

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by Anonymous04/05/04

*awed*

Best story I've read on Literotica thus far! PLEASE keep it up!

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by Vixandra04/16/04

Mercy!

Oh, thank you KillerMuffin for that! A wonderfully written, erotic story. Loved the verbal play between the characters as well as the setting.
Very well done!

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by francypants10/03/04

You are the BEST, KM!

Loved every fucking word of it ... what a great dynamic you created between them! Wonderful details about the eroticism of anal play along with the realities of it!

Are there more Mare & Ryan stories? I like them alot!

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Omg!

Wow, I orgasmed twice, just fro reading that story! I love anal, and that was a great representation! Nice dialogue too!

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by Anonymous03/09/06

WOW!

That was one very sexy story.
Very, very hot!

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by Anonymous09/06/06

Unbelievable!

That was Amazing! I absolutely loved the dynamics between them and their banter. Their closeness and the fact that it was their first time made it SO erotic.

I have been reading Literotica regularly for about 5 years and I can honestly say that this is the first time I have been moved to comment! It may even inspire me to finally write something of my own!

Thanks!

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by Anonymous11/22/06

hell yeah

yhatwas sooooo hot i was fingering myself the whole time i cummed

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by rfd_one03/12/07

Good job

Very good story, I liked everything from front to end. I had a full blown boner reading this story. Keep it up. he he he

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by Anonymous09/05/07

nice!

great writing and true real life interactions :)

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by Cindersmoke03/05/08

Way to go

This was WAY realistic and sexi as hell I liked it ALOT ALOT and im a skeptic with these stories.

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by HamboneSweets02/05/09

Loved it!

Your a terrific writer! Thanks for saying "shya right"! Finally, a story that's actually funny and hot!

Would love to read more!!

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by thebearjew02/04/10

Fantastic stuff!

Brilliantly written, wonderful dialogue and not overly technical. Nice.

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by peebudy07/21/10

saving ryan's privates!

great story. they say a good friend will help you move and a great friend will help you move a body. ryan must be a really great friend, moving her body all over the lawn and bringing it to multi orgasms.

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by annie37908/11/10

ooh

this is so hot

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by Rainmaker196512/12/10

Unbelievable!

There are so many one word adjectives for this story, unfortunately, if I were to put them in this little space, I'd be writing for quite a while and maybe even inventing a few of my own.

Like before, this story wasn't technically written, but it was written with just enough description that the reader's mind got the chance to play and filled in all the glorious blanks that you superbly left.

I found the humor you used to be the part that took the story over the top - I LOVED IT! I have a very vivid imagination, and throughout this story, it was as if I was standing right behind them watching.

PLEASE keep writing, as this was wonderful.

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by Dannj3906/01/12

Lovely

Lovely storytelling! I would have loved to have read it with him cumming inside your ass !

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by Thomas9906/18/13

cool

that was so realistic very good

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