All Comments on 'A Dark Skinned Beauty'

by tnpervert

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AsgardAsgardabout 19 years ago
Wham - bang....?

Beginning good, but then it rushed ahead at super speed. No build up, no real presentation of the characters, no story. There are too many stroke stories around, and unfortunately this is one of them. Think about it, and better luck next time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Good premise!

I love that the TN White man is so hot for a Black girl!

More stories like this!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Green card girl

Cha Ching!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Green card girl?

You think? I can't see that happening, given that Nigeria has so many wealthy princes and the US has none. I get e-mail from them all the time, must've received 419 of them so far this week, all offering to send money...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Nice story

Loved your descriptions, keep on writing!

StevieLynn23StevieLynn23over 13 years ago
:)

This is an amazing piece. Made my day.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great story

Please write the next part soon

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