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by Anonymous04/05/05

WOW!!!

What a wonderfull start to your story , so well told ,hope it will not be too long before you write the next chapter.

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by gotwood4904/06/05

Amazing...

...Isn't it something, TD, the way our minds work? I enjoyed this the first time you shared it with me, and you've only improved it. (Now I must submit mine!) You keep growing as a writer, and we readers reap the benefit! Part II, please?

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by Anonymous04/08/05

Hot

That is one hot story. I am not afraid to admit I found myself very aroused reading it. I cannot wait for the rest of the story.

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by rfm105/24/05

Great Story

I loved the story and it was hot. Keep writing Let me know when you write something new.

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by Anonymous05/31/05

anxiously awaiting on Part 2

Have always fantasized of a good doctor showing and making me feel all the wonders of womanhood...mmmm cant wait for the next one.....

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by Anonymous08/10/07

ok

I shall reserve comment, till I read the follow up. Start writing. U start good then fall off. Supper time, I've got to go.

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by Anonymous08/10/08

KEEP GOING!!!!!PLEASE

PLEASE KEEP GOING, this is diffently one story i like alot, it has me going crazy wanting a man right now(if you know what i mean), and PLEASE do keep writing this story!!!!!!

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by Anonymous02/13/11

PART 2

please can we have a part two just read this and am desperate for the rest !!!!!!!!

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