All Comments on 'When the Balls Drop; A New Years Tale Ch. 01'

Real good start to the story but need more of story before

you stop. Continue on to the next chapter you have my interest

up now as to what will happen next. Sounds like the New Year will have a few surprises in store for Mason at Mickey's Bar.

what's next... can't wait to find out post it fast! :)

good up and character setup...now for the action! :)

can't wait ...hurry....

now reel me in <grin> 5^ LB test lines <hehehey>

Luscious read~(~_*)

artful story telling...can't wait to read the rest!

TELL ME MORE...MORE...MORE...

Hi Everyone...

I know this has been a long slow tease... but i wanted to let you all know ch's 2-5(the conclusion) are sitting at Lit. waiting for them to do their thingy and post them....

So hang around and bare with me...I submitted the rest after the 1st comment came in asking for more...

Hope You will all enjoy it....in the meantime checkout some of my other stories! ;)

Kisses,

LuciousBi

I really enjoy your submissions in this story line, my only complaint which is not really a huge complaint is that the stories are so short. Lucky for us readers, you are so quick to post the next piece and not leave us in suspense. Great story and please keep up the great work

sorry...the sticking close to the 750 wrd limit would be because I am in the Author Survivor contest this year for the 1st time...we get points for how prolific we can be...how many stories we can post in one years time...

so if i submit it as 12 or 14 short chapter rather than 1 long piece I get a lot more points!

matter of fact with this series I've moved into 8th place! ;)

thanks for reading...voting and commenting! :)

kisses to you all,

LuciousBi