This seems so personal that to comment is almost an intrusion, so I'll 5 it and wimp off.
The perfect line: "I love your big Mick Jagger lip"
The rest made me cry. Maybe it's pms. Maybe I'm a sap. Most likely because this was so real.
kingdoms fall...because nothing can compare to the love of a beautiful woman.
Truly one of the best things you've ever written.
it's honest, tender, and exposes your vulnerability which is sexy as hell.
This Terence, he is a lucky man, no??
I just love the way you write
so very much like wonder woman~
I meant a woman wondering
bows humble to a poetic grasshopper
how does this man named Terence with a big Mick Jagger lip handle all your love? I have to tell you, this poem speaks devotion to the nth degree. Simply unheard of...
A great expression of unconditional love.
.............smile. Thanks, Ange - and Terence.
Beautiful work, angeline!
Here's a big marshmallow peep for both of you!
(Glad that sty cleared up, Terry!)
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!
orBack to Second Nature
orMore submissions by Angeline.
Edit comment orSubmit Comment
Comment posted successfully - click here to view it or write another.
Title of your comment:
Your public comment about Second Nature:
Login or Sign Up
All contents © Copyright 1998-2012. Literotica is a trademark. No part may be reproduced in any form without explicit written permission.
Terms Of Services|Report A Problem|Privacy
Password:Forgot your password?
Your current user avatar, all sizes:
You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.
Select new user avatar:
Upload and save
User avatar uploaded successfuly and waiting for moderation.