All Comments on 'The Demonstration'

No, seriously I am curious. Or really just a fiction?

Your story was quite interesting and also very hot.You are a writer who has a profound graspe of the female body and its erotic areas-Great job of erotic writing.

I don't know whether I envy Mr. B more for using his tongue to publicly pleasure the woman on stage... or being able to inspire this beautiful authoress into writing such an original and well thought-out work of erotica.

I would give my left tongue to be him.

Delicious job, Normique

I really enjoyed this! It's well written and higly sensuous and erotic. The vivid descriptions certainly aroused me!

You sure know your stuff love.

Bob

This waa a most exsquisite piece of erotica I ever dreamed to read ! Just art of the written word. Forget videos and such. Savor this writer's tactile gift for words of erotica.

I felt it take my breath away to read it. And as man who likes feeling his lover in the throes of orgasm, I was absorbing all the nuances .thoren

are there any homo sapiens of either gender not completely thrilled by this ?