All Comments on 'Craig's Dreams Come True'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
more detail

It was way too short. There needed to be more build up, more story, and more detail. What was there was good, but definintely need to flesh it out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
*tut*tut*

this is bad good concept but way to short, it started when it finished. What happened tot he flirting, the sexual heat and tension...a big let down

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Love it

Loved it, didn't mess about, got straight into screwing and coming as quick a possible

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