All Comments on 'You’re My Bitch Now'

if someone stupid enough to let someone blackmail them that doest make it rape.

at any time, it's still rape...

Enjoyed it very much

i really liked this story, good discriptions, it really got me going.

loved it made me cum very fast

The vacsectomy ruined this story. I don't know why it is....these stories are supposed to be erotic and mostly fantasies. I don't know what is wrong with the housewife, neighbor,neighbor's daughter, etc., etc. getting pregnant in them. I think it would be a "blast" for my wifey, daughter, sister, or girlfriend to get pregnant by the neighbor stud.

SLOW THE HELL DOWN!!

It's ...nice, but fantasy? I think not.

hey if the husband is not home she is not married LOL

Can I come to your next party?

I'd also like to be invited to your next party. ;c)

Drunk horny bitches should be fucked. If they agree to it, then that's even better

awesome story excellent wriitng felt almost liek i was there and a belivealble story line

This was poorly written, inconsistent, and you really ought to stay away from the keyboard in the future.

No one acts like that in real life; your fantasies are pathetic. I'd be surprised if you got laid once in 5 years.

This isn't a grammar or English class. This is hot sex using words. If it can be read and understood, who cares? Your story had me playing with myself the whole time. A sexy rape fantasy? Dirty black mail? What's not to love!?? Keep the stories *cumming*!!!

Just thought i'd respond the the "fucking retarded" comment...maybe you should try finding different woman to spend your time with because this story is exactly something i would do *giggles* wouldn't have an issue, infact i almost beg for this to happen hehe. Wonderful story as well as the second half xo♥xo♥. i hope i get a chance to live this hehe

♥~ golden_lace

ignore the criticism. Rape on this site is only in print. just because someone writes about it,does not mean they approve of it. Thought it was a very good story, I am looking forward to reading chapter 2.

Fantasy is just that, some can happen and a lot of women want a man just to take her no questions asked, keep writing I loved it.

Kat

liked it but it wasnt really "rape" she enjoyed it far to quickly!

An amazing tale about getting a perfect piece of tail. I am so hard it aches right now.

goddamn that was hot!

I'm afraid that spelling/grammar errors took away from your storyline.

that was terrible. don't show any women your stories. they aren't hot.

Seriously, I'm not saying this to be nasty but I really don't think writing is for you. This has a plot with no structure and the dialogue is so unrealistic, it sounds like some ironic, post-modern, college performance about sexualization of the media.

The way he "grabs" his camera is ridiculous. And the 'you can give my pussy one lick'? No woman is that easy and if they are then they wouldn't want to stop at one lick. In fact, scrap that... have you ever met a woman?!

This is like reading something written by a fourteen year old. Ignore all the good comments on here, please, these people don't know what they're talking about, they must be high on meth or just so sex starved that they could cum watching an advert for cleaning products.

Sorry if this it too harsh, but it's honest.

holy shit.. that is what relationship with my man is like in the bedroom... he calls me his little whore and we also have a deal.. it was like he wrote it... damn

did not notice the spelling and grammer errors, I thought it was exciting

No plot, no seduction, no personalities. Why bother?

Doesn't matter about the plot to me. Got me excited and I wish that girl was me! That is my fantasy too! Wish I had a neighbor like that!

I totally enjoy reading this story. Turns me on every time! Keep writing please.

I couldn't even finish it this first time through. I came so hard!!!

Hot story. I came reading this!

Would be great to have a slut neighbour like her next door. :)

Damn, I wish I could be the sexy neighbor. This is my fantasy, too.

Loved this story, it's absolutely perfect! I have this fantasy and now seeing someone write about it makes me hope it comes true. Found it by accident but wish I had found it sooner, hope you keep writing.

My wife was raped by a black neighbor and he took lots of pics and made her agree to be his slut. A few weeks later she refused him and said it was over. So, he came over and showed me the pics. He said he was going to put them on the web unless I sucked his cock. I did it and he took pics of me doing it. Now my wife and I are both his slaves.

wish someone would blackmail me and use me like that. i'm a bi male and fantasize about being used alot.

I agree about the dialogue. Could have been a bit more racey and less technical and 'scripted'. I suppose the idea was good and I wouldn't say a terrible read, but needs work in my opinion. I would say keep trying but you obviously appeal to some people. Biggest change I would strongly suggest....repeat of 'oh no please don't get me pregnant' not such a turn on. Quite the opposite. Good luck with future stories :-)

By the very end I had cum.

The vasectomy takes away from the fantasy, and she enjoys it too quickly (I love a bit more struggle even if she's soaking).

Imagine my surprise when I went looking for a story to masturbate to and came across one which used MY name (Sabrina)... awesome

You used "your" incorrectly EVERY TIME and it dried me up like a cactus in a drought. "Your" shows possesion of something like "YOUR cock" or "YOUR tits". "You're" is a shortened version of "you are" like "YOU'RE enjoying this aren't you?" or "YOU'RE so wet".

Yall need jesus

Ever heard of Jesus? Well if u haven't,get a fucking life and say "my body belongs to josie" because I'll rape and fuck your brains out if you don't!

I wouldve liked a bit more submission but it was great. As for the people commenting about god, you read the story so stfu stupid hypocrites

Read this because of the new sequel.

can't have his own woman, so he is fantasizing of raping other's.

Anyone who enjoys this story as is needs serious mental help.

I would never have read this if it had not been a prequel to a follow-on by FTDS.

I am sorry I got sucked in to this piece of trash. (being nice)

I am sure there are predators like this out there, I just don't like reading about them.

Just plain immoral.

Makes me sad. Hope the FTDS story makes it worth it.

....and you're a damn fool, if you think any self-respecting man, father, husband, you pick, isn't going to be outraged by this character and his story.

Lynch-mobs are too good for you, but will not likely assemble, since, apparently nowadays, any moral person is at risk for committing the capital crime of having morals at all.

You bear responsibility for what you unleash on the world. Expect backlash.

This was a truly lousy example of machismo at its worst.

He says her husband doesn't know she was forced in there, but if he trusts her (and up till now we've seen no reason why he wouldn't!) he should believe her, and exact revenge!

these are stories, right? People write these stories to excite themselves and others who like to read fantasies. It's not something they would do in real life. it's a story. that's it. a story. if you don't like 'forced' stories, don't read 'forced' stories.

..Anonymous is right, of course. Nevertheless, a good story ought to have a probable or rational basis; it is that basis that involves readers and gets to them emotionally.

Stories where the protagonist is "dumb as a piece of bread" are usually dead before anything happens. This story provides proof of that: Had she gone to the police right away they would have searched the house, found the pictures and he would have been locked up for a long time. Everybody would have believed her had she claimed that she´d been tricked into going to his house. Hardly a possibility for him to plausibly deny anything. Instead, that brain-dead woman lets herself be blackmailed without end - until eventually her husband will find out.

So: This story did not convince me..

Finish the Damn Story, gave this story a much better ending.

I've said this before, why do people in these stories do MORE under threat of blackmail than what they did to be blackmailed for? If you (supposedly) did "A", and are threatened that if you don't do "B" that your doing "A" will be revealed, I'd say go ahead, at least I can say that I didn't do "B"!

I enjoyed the story until he took his cock out her ass and stuck it in her cunt. Poor girl will have a raging infection in a matter of hours.

Liked how demanding the guy was with her I liked the storie

A DISGUSTING THREE HOLE CUM DUMP PIECE OF SHIT! BITCH WANTED TO BE USE .... AND SHE WAS!!!! ***** THERE WAS ***NO*** FORCE .... JUST A TRAILER TRASH WHORE WIFE SERVICING MORE COCKS .... BURN IN HELL WHORE!!!!!

Idk why that other comment is so agressive this story is very well written. I would love to be the girl in this. Made me cum twice!!

Love love love this story. I'm dripping wet from it. Would love to hear more of this dirty little fantasy. Well written. Thank you. Xxx

My pussy is dripping wet. I wish I had someone to take

me and fuck me until he was satisfied. Make me your bitch.

This is SO HOT! My pussy is fucking soaking wet and dripping. I want someone to takr me anytime they want and fuck my warm pussy and ass into oblivion! So hard that i wont be able to walk ever. But anyway you're a good author and i loved your story

I once had a sexy, built like a brick shithouse neighbor who liked to flirt and tease, just like this one, but I didn't have to get her drunk. One day we were alone and doing our usual 'kidding around' when I pinched her nipples and simultaneously gave her a peck on the lips. Her husband was out of town a lot and I must have caught her at a weak moment because I saw it in her eyes that she was ready to be taken. I ate her cunt, sucked her tits and fucked three loads into her unprotected reproductive system.

Her husband and I looked a lot alike and were built much the same so she was really surprised when she saw what I was about to stuff into her pussy. She said I had him beat by almost three inches and was almost twice as thick. She'd started coming within thirty seconds and must have had thirty orgasms before we were done. We never let on anything at all, when he was at home but when he was on the road, she was my wife and bed partner most every night.

She never said a thing about using protection and three months later, she missed her period. After she told me she was pregnant, she just smiled, put her finger in front of her lips, went shhhhh and said, "Lester will never know." He never did and he didn't the next time, either.

Sorry, just can't deal with the idea of anal and then vaginal sex without washing in between. All I can think of is all of the potential infections, and it grossed me out.

ALL OF YOU BITCHES CUM TO ME A D YOU WILL GET WHAT YOU NEED BADLY FAST AND HARDCORE! DADDY WAITING!

Thank the heavens you stopped writing or your boyfriend finally gave you aids. It is no wonder your stories always rated so poorly. You write like a 15 year old coming home to stroke thinking about the high school science teacher. It is hilarious that guys with your imagination always seem to have restraints tied to your beds, obviously the only way you ever got a female to stay in your bed.

My wife was a barmaid and used to come home in the early hours she said they had lock-ins and just work mates having a drink after a hard shift, she would never have sex when she came home l was sure she was putting it about one night l forced her she didn't put up much of a defence and when l thrust my penis inside her it was like a pea in a drum l didn't touch the sides of her dripping wet cunt....the big surprise was it gave me such a thrill knowing she had been shaged with much bigger cock than mine and their load was still in her, after that she told me she got fucked on her first shift and most nights she gets passed around and loves every minute.

What is unbelievable is the cruely stated divergence of opinions...take a pill!

It could have been a little more rapey for my taste.

2 stars overworked plot

Cheating slut and guy who takes advantage

Thanks for FTDS to take care of cheaters

Not bad, but not good either. You could really use more detail, and your writing skills need to improve. Overall a good fantasy for people into the reluctance genre.

It’s not as good as most reluctance stories. The plot is overused. Drunk cheating wife gets taken advantage of. Meh.

Way too rapey. It had a good start but it shifted to read more like what someone who has only read about physically violent sex vs someone who has experienced (and loves) it. It totally made me lose my orgasm.

After "It had been awhile since I cut loose..." I knew it would be good. (Wink) Great story.

"It had been awhile since I cut loose, spring was here and I was tired of being cooped up in the house alone."

Obviously, it's not his house. Student? High schooler?

"I decided to have a get together and invite some friends from work over several weeks ago."

Workmates?

I loved it! One of my best jerk off material in literotica.

why cant you use some oil if you are broke enough to have some lube

fuck her ass harder ,faster,rougher,longer i dont care as long as you lubed her nicely

which you didnt so to make it more painful and humiliating to her which gives you pleasure

I want to be taken control of like that and just f..... Good story.

I like rapey sex stories… but a woman experiencing pleasure does NOT mean that it’s not rape. Gaslighting ruins the story.

I Love to ravish a woman and make her cum so hard and so many times she floods the bed and almost always wants to cum back for more.. And I only tie them up if they consent and like him I like to have photographic or video proof so she can't recant the next day especially if married and the guilt hits her

ah-DUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

What's a taught little arsehole? What has it learned? Or mebbe it speaks? A talk little arsehole, or is it twisted - a torque little arsehole. The author should invest in an education, or at least a dictionary.

I wish you were my neighbor and I was a woman with a pussy. You would be welcome to my mouth or boipussy anytime. Hugs dear man 4yourpleasureiam

I can't believe some of these comments, I was daft enough to trust an ex boyfriend with pics of me drunk and nude.i was blackmailed after he saw me in a bar a few years later. I am married and have a good job.i was told unless I do as he said my husband, family, boss etc would all get copies.i let him take more pics of me to keep quiet but then that turned to him having sex with me and then me having sex with his mates too.

It took me a while to figure it out but our neighbor a big black dude had blackmailed my wife into having sex with him. On the night that it was supposed to happen I was out of town for work. The story I was told goes like this. I made sure that I was with witnesses to cover my story if I was asked. Just as Harold the black neighbor answered his door to let my wife Elise in 2 people barged in and beat him severely. They had left a note saying this is from your past actions you should move away far away. I guess Elise fled from the seen and actually wasn't even questioned. Harold did move to where don't know don't care. Returning home I asked anything exciting happen while I was gone. Mostly the normal but she said one of the neighbors had said that Harold was broken into and beaten. Really doesn't surprise me I had heard rumors that he has caused some problems in some marriages. Has he ever hit on you Elise? Yes but he has never got to first base. That's good but if anyone I mean anyone goes to hitting on you ever again you had better let me know agreed? Yes I agree. Good because I couldn't live with a cheater and I wouldn't expect you would tolerate me cheating. Agreed she said.

If it weren't for the "Yeah. It was my fantasy" ...

I loved it either way.

Great my wife got fucked by a friend in somewhat the same manner and loved becoming his slut cum bucket. She has twice weekly sex with him and he videos it and has produced a best selling porn video. Her share of the revenue is now in the thousands of dollars and it’s producer has just hired her for a six part gang bang series and she’s really excited as I am to start it. The first one is with nine black dudes.

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