All Comments on '1Wish'

by Extreme Bohunk

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
loved it ... sooo hot

first thing i did after reading this was to disable the pop-up blocker on this computer... and to think a "loving wife" story where no one gets cheated on or humiliated and it still gave me "wood"...maybe a good idea,that is well written, is what it takes...who would have guessed...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
If I had 1Wish...

...it would be to have Extreme Bohunk craft ALL my sexual fantasies for me!

This story should be required reading for anyone looking to rekindle the passion in a long-standing relationship.

Thank you for sharing your amazing talent with us, babe...you rock!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Yea Author

A fantastic clean but lusty supremely sexual wife and husband story - golly uncle Wilma - that was hot - wow

Appreciate it Author - more please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Not good. It's Outstanding!

Man you do know how to put a story together. Its got sex, it's erotic and it shows a wicked sense of humor. You have the complete package.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
The Favorites Menu

Every once in a while, one like this comes along that's a keeper. Excellent story and superbly written.

Thank You!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
But what about Bob?

I enjoyed this story immensely. However, I was hoping while she was blindfolded, that Bob would slip in for a surprise lol!

AlexandraAlexandraover 18 years ago
Yummy wow

Thanks Extreme Bohunk. Well written and a turn on from start to finish. If only something would pop-up like this in my love life...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Wow

Just ... wow ...

Lee ChambersLee Chambersover 17 years ago
Awesome story

Amazingly hot sex. Loved the entire story. My favorite part, however, was Bob presenting his union worker's business card. Fucking funny and original. Keep it up.

la_gordita_bonitala_gordita_bonitaover 13 years ago
Mmmmm!

What a deliciously erotic story! I loved every word, and would LOVE to find out what happened later that day for John's wish. It was fantastic, left me panting and wanting more, and I thank you for it!!! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Please write more. Your stories drive me crazy. So erotic and they are long, so you really tease the reader. I love them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Should be "extreme shit" !!

Perverted and inept. One of the worst.

DWornockDWornockover 12 years ago
Fairy tales and Fantasy is good.

So I rated it 4****. The story is too crude or something for the highest rating. However, I enjoyed it and it was sexy.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
PERSONS THAT TEMPT FATE

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tazz317tazz317about 9 years ago
I WISH I MAY I WISH I MIGHT

have a dream I dreamt last night...TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Very erotic!

Well written story. Loved how you incorporated her fantasies coming true. Where do I find that pop-up ad?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Rumplestiltskin's brother

Fast paced fun! Not too deep, just entertaining.

Plus some humor which was a welcome break, and you have a very good short erotic story.

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Silly

Silly as your.name. I had relatives in West Va and bohunk wasn't a term of endearment.

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