All Comments on 'Jack & Jen'

I liked the fact that several types of exhibitionism are going on here -- audible & visual. Plus the added bonus of the thrill of semi-public masturbation (and what a thrill it is!). But there are some point-of-view problems with the way it's told. The narrator has no visual contact with the couple fucking, yet she tells us when Jack is pulling his partner's hair -- too much of what she describes would only be ascertainable (or ASSertainable) by visual contact. Changing the cell phone to a picture phone would solve that problem, assuming Jack also has a picture phone.

Once again you have done a good job with a story!! And phone sex is so much fun too. And the truck driver watching---HOTTT! But he could have smiled or given you a "thumbs up" or tooted the horn--something to let you know he approved!!! I would have!!

Also to listen to someone else getting fucked has got to be very erotic!!

Loved the story hon!