All Comments on 'Koochy'

by bradley_stoke

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Not bad.

bisexual to me are greedy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
mmm

Drugs scene isn't my thing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
THAT IS SOME VERY GOOD WRITING

I enjoyed getting lost in the details as they come out. Your sentences so clearly describe actions as thoughts occur I could see her moving to kiss her new lover. That description, "tasting sweat and navigating the contours of the hard reddish skin of the aureole of motherhood," just awed me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I enjoyed your story.

Thanks for sharing.

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