All Comments on 'Beast'

Damn!!! Great work, Bel.

Yes! Yes! Yes! ~Imp

Really nice, tight. The structure adds so much tension. Thank you for sharing it and making the hair on the back of my neck rise.

Willow

at My next scene will be a bit longer! <grin> The intense physical passion grew and grew in this piece as the last few lines did it all for Me..."blood rushing to darken lips...crushed against mine...all illusions of gentility...lost...to the beast of my desire" Another kiss assassin is in our midst! My sub will be taking notes to study if he has any sense of competition. lol

Vixxx

within me has been unleashed by the eroticism of these words.

very sexy. Thanks for this!

~Syn

Great job Bel, you're a fine poet, and always an inspiration for me. :)

That was very good!

the beast within roars, TK U MLJ LV NV