All Comments on 'Connection'

I really liked this poem because as a reader I could put different pairing of characters into it .Innocent youngsters, older people, friends. It reminded me a bit of the John Betjeman poem "In a Bath Tea Shop" - "But both, for a moment little lower than the angels".

the three lines: so serious

a soul

so sweet

maybe were not required ?

Thanks

portrait of sharing and trust , how it grows and how simple things mean so much.

There is something childlike here, it is pure and honest and very moving, to me at least.

It is puppy love that balances on the edge of true understanding.

A moment, in my opinion, that hasn't been captured often enough.

This does that moment proud.

Thank you

This is a wonderful poem, Willow; your trademark clarity and honesty. Enjoyed it very much.

[sp: grateful]

Lovely poem.

The sentiment is expressed in a tender way. I leave this page with a smile and a good feeling. Thanks

Conveys a mutual bond in a gentle and sweet manner. "Connection" really connects on many levels.

this is quite the best poem of the day. possibly of the week.

~Syn

it's all in the connectivity and bringing it all together. great job!!!! don

You read first the verse;

most difficult of all,

you read each other, and discover

as your words flow,

you are each other.

Thank you for sharing it! ~ Imp

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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