All Comments on 'Family Fun Begins Ch. 05'

You are a good writer Your Story "Family fun Begins" with all its chapters is one of the best in this excellent site

Keep writing . Thank you

A good story, indeed, and well written. But in the end you hurried up to much. It would have been a better story, if you hadn't come to an end too fast and made the story about half a page or a whole page longer.

Loved the group of stories titled "Family Fun"

Very well written please write another series, maybe a follow up to this.

Thanks,

Mike

I blew two loads deep into my cousin after we read this story. I hope the next two stories are just as hot. We both love them! I think I might even be able to convince her to let me break her anal cherry after she read this!

HE must b too busy fucking LITTLE BOYS! & Carrie, u'd think after 5 ch's, your grammar & tense would've improved. No such luck, I guess.