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Baby789about 13 years agoWow
The way you write is amazing, I wish I could write like you these stories almost had me crying I love them so much Love Baby789
Silentbystanderover 12 years agoThird chapter and the first that didn't make me cry
...much anyway. Dead lovers always get to me. You're a fantastic writer.
Anonymousover 10 years agoGood try
This story has some nice elements to it, but plays out too much like a soap opera. You don't take the time to flush anything out and it all comes off as cheap and far to coincidental.
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