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by nudemac

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Difficult to read

Writing a good story is more then just typing your fantasy in your word processor. Although the fantasy is nice, trying to get past the poor punctuation is difficult. Try asking somone to proofread your next story, and I'm sure it will do better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
nice story

could use another chapter

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