All Comments on 'The Day My Cock Fell Off'

by Chimney Sweep

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evelyn_carrollevelyn_carrollalmost 19 years ago
A Hand After My Own Part

Oh, dear, I meant: a man after my own heart.

Apart from a couple of 'and did he do' type lines this is perfect. Bounces along; and full of wit and insight.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
!

This was a really fun read, but... ummm... could you change Beth to maybe Judy, or Pat.... ANYTHING but Beth!! lol

Thanks,

Boo

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Of the walls!

That wasw the funniest thing I've read in years, your control of the4 verse was exellent, and many an insightful line with humorus cruve does grace the pages of your poem. I look forward to more like this, keep up the good work.

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
This proves...

that the other head also has a mind of its own. LOL!

impressiveimpressivealmost 19 years ago
Thanks ...

... for the light, fun read! ~ Imp

angelicminxangelicminxalmost 19 years ago
OMFG!

Absolutely hilarious! I loved every line. Thank you. ~Minx

Unsung MuseUnsung Museover 18 years ago
I Adore This Poem!

I've come back to read it three or four times now, so I figured I should leave a comment ; )

Thoroughly Enjoyable!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Fucking Amazing

I was just cruising through reading some of the other stuff that my fellow poetry writers have written and i am glad i read this one AMAZING

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Fuckin awesome!

That kicked ass. I could almost see the Dr. Seuss book in my head.

KadhroghKadhroghalmost 14 years ago
Great poem!

That was a bloody good read, you had me laughing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Fucking amazing.

OMFG. So clever and comical. Thank you for that great laugh.

ArjayEiffArjayEiffover 11 years ago
Funny and well written

Good job, leaves us asking for more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Funny!

Thoroughly enjoyed the poem! Keep them coming :)

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