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postobitumpostobitumalmost 19 years ago
Hmmm

I don't really get your poems today, it could just be me. What I do get is more of an aura of intellectual coldness or just plain mechanical uncaring from them though, so it's not like I totally just didn't take anything from your work. :) I will say on The Jack there were some grmmatical/punctuation errors (or what seemed like errors) that made it more difficult to read.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Seems a bit cynical perhaps.

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