All Comments on 'Caught By Mom Ch. 03'

by CelticScorpion101

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
very good, don't hurry

I liked this part a lot. It's a good idea that you let the story develop step by step and instead of rushing it's fences.

Go on without hurry, each chapter, mother and son can get a bit closer to fucking. Next part, the mother and her friend could give a (double) blowjob, then he could fuck mother's friend under the guidance of his mother and so on.

Hermit

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
A Whale of a Tale

You're doing it right! Take your time and let the whole process develop naturally. It's going to be a great, hot, sexy story. You have made a great start.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
more please !

MORE !!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
hot

Have mom & Jenna dress up in heels, seamed hose, garter belt, silk blouse and pleated mini skirt and take them out on the town and cum all over there faces

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
great

come on not so short the story.

keep it coming.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Oh so HOT

Oh my, 18 years old and totally naked in front of your mother and her friend. This story has made my cock so hard that I've been stroking it as I read your story. PLEASE you must continue, tell us of all the nasty things this nurse friend and Danny's mother have in store for our studly young mastrabator. HOT! HOT! HOT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
More please

So, what happens next? I've gotta know!

satan666satan666over 18 years ago
more

please more. i loved all three of them. make the next one even longer and involve Jenna

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
hot

loved it but in the next one he need to fuck jenna and possibly his momma

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Anxiously waiting fro anothet part!!!!!!

Please please do post the 4th part involving jenna and mom, Also please have a good double blow from boh ladies...

MOOON

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
an idea

have him have a threesome with jenna and his mom, but he doesnt do his mom, just bjs nd stuff, make the part where he does his mom a proper full on special occasion.

aaron

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very hot

Can hardly wait for pt.4. Maybe have mom and Jenna do each other, w/Jenna on top and you fuck her. WOW, such a great story line.

cariboo51cariboo51over 17 years ago
so what happens next

Is jenna going to join in?When is mom going to taste that luscious spear?There must be more more more....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Awesome

this reminds me of a similar encounter i had with my big tit cousin it was fucking amazing. i luv this whole incest thing keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

I loved it so! I came twice while reading. WHY did it end so quick??? What about jenna.? Don't she get any?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
nice story

hey man, thx for the story :), you should write the 4th part :) and the 5th and 6th, man i love this story

vietvetvietvetalmost 14 years ago
5 Years:

Its only been 5 years since Jenna entered the room. What happened?

widow44widow44almost 14 years ago
incest

i loved the story. its like reliving what happen to my son & me i walked in his bedroom one morning he was lying on his bed jacking off. as much as i dident want to look i just had to i told him not let me stop you. i never knew how well deveoped he had become. i,v always had a thing for uncut cocks.i stayed till he shot off. next morning i walked in on him again only this time i only had a robe on i let it open so he could see all of me.

David48David48almost 14 years ago
Please continue

So many really good writers just seem to "go away". Hope you are doing well...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
his mother loves eating her boy's ball juice

The Irish lad listed his age as 18 to 21 when he wrote these hot tales of a wannabe motherfucker. Now he's probably in his early 20s, his hot young balls still stimulated to the max by the idea of mommy-cunt. It's sad that we haven't heard from him for a while. But my guess is the reason is that the young Celtic Scorpion has gone on to what all boys dream of--he's been shoving his fine young prick up his mother's cunt whenever he feels the urge, and unloading his overflowing balls up her wide-open motherly gash. In the story, Danny's mom is wild for what her boy's got sloshing around in that heavy sack between his legs, and I bet that the author's mother is just as crazy for her son's rich creamy semen! She wants it where mothers want--and need!--their boy's young potent sperm, deep up the same cunthole he came out of! Mothers are very proud of what their boy's got swinging between his strong young legs, his big prick stiff as only a young man's prick can be, ready to deliver huge doses of that syrup that's SO soothing to a mother's needy puss. As the old saying goes, "A mother's twat is her son's playground," and both Danny and Mr. Scorpion are having the time of their young motherfucking lives in their playground!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
omg has to continue

friend gets penitrated vaginaly first then mom as twist but mom starts with blowjob

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I like privacy and one on one, but this is well written and has promise.

Morlan502Morlan502almost 12 years ago
To Be Continued...

Ah yes the death knell of any story, the famous last line "to be continued." Decent enough story till its untimely to be continued death.... 2005 is a long time to get out the next installment or to finish the story off....

tnrebtnrebalmost 11 years ago
more to come?

well, we are still waiting for Jenna to walk in and get her taste!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

jenna should taste his cum but he should fuck his mom later on, fuck her tight dirty pussy

mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchalmost 11 years ago
oh dear

I read the first chapter unaware that the series had continued. But a concern I had came true. Ch1 showed potential, but I wasn't sure if it would continue over to the next. It didn't. The rest is generic. Since when is a tit fuck a special treat? We're not talking anal here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great work

I really hope there is another one, he needs to fuck her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
intense cummings

wow read lots and some are similar but this one was intense. I love the part when Jenn was watching at the doorway, not the fact mom had told her they were doing things. why i find exciting is taboo but know many families actually do this kind of thing. wanting the mom to share his cock with a friend thats hot!! Many women love to see men cumming and are willing to jerk them off ohh more reading hehe

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 10 years ago
Waiting on Ch. 04.

Or maybe 05 and 06. Fuck Mom AND her friend.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Smoothly smoothly.

Very good, hands down how you've written so nicely, knowing all along that Jenna would be watching, great fantasy, not slutty, Mom please let Jenna have the last drops and be first to take his cock in her mouth, you are two beauties, you must dress up for him, his big cock is yours and could get bigger, your all going to have a great time and get so horny, honestly getting filthy dirty is fine,

very sexy more please.

sp

bolterbolterover 8 years ago
loved it!

would love to read the continuation with jenna involved

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wow

The suspense is killing me but I love it, can't wait for the next one, was so hoping she would give him a blowjob!

Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesover 8 years ago
Don't hold your breath.

The suspense is killing you? This was submitted in spring of 2005! I think the suspense died some time around 2007. If you want to see more of this story, I don't think that Celtic Scorpion is going to be the one to write it.

ejherbieejherbieabout 7 years ago
More

Loved the story so far, but don't leave us hanging to long. You've got to continue it.

MomjackinMomjackinalmost 7 years ago
Mom and I mutual masturbation

I'm Tom. 35. 6'3". 256 lbs. I have black hair brown eyes a full beard and In coveted in hair from my neck to my ankles. I wear a size 14 shoe and have 10 1/2 thick cut curved inches. 2 huge balls. And Um a former football player and bodybuilder. Mom has recently come to live with me. Mom is 57. 5'9" same black hair and brown eyes. 157 lbs. 44dd-28-48. And she loves to get naked with me and watch me masturbate. She does the same for me. I shoot big loads. She loves for me to cum on her pussy. She was physically abused by my father. Mentally and emotionally abused by my stepfather.. They both know I better not see them again. Mom is safe with me. And she has freedom to do whatever she wants. I'm glad she likes the same things I do. Like mother Luke son. We have sex also. But that's another story. All I can say is how any man would abuse a beautiful intelligent loving sexy interesting woman like mom is beyond me. Well dad didn't appreciate her. She's mine now.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
more soon

id love to know what happens between danny his mum and jenna so do please finish soon thanks

bobenjoys183bobenjoys183over 6 years ago
Continue please

Yes, we need more of this story. So hot !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

chapter 4? can't wait to read about Jenna

Bobenjoys9495Bobenjoys9495over 4 years ago
Perfect

You have built this whole story up perfectly. Excited to read about Jenna’s involvement. Keep it going.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 4 years ago

I loved the story but given that chapter three was published over 14 1/2 years ago, I don't think we're going to find out what happened when Jenna walked in.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great build up, why didn’t you continue this story?

shadowolf1shadowolf1over 1 year ago
hot hot

but why do people close the blasted door if it is just them...i wish my mom had done this...and with one of her friends or even one of my sisters....so hot

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