All Comments on 'Wet Miranda's Nude Wrestling Match'

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tonykelly77tonykelly77almost 19 years ago
the battling babes

Hi just read your brilliant story.Just keep em coming

lots more of the wrestling.and her rise to the top.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Authentic

I liked that you had the ultimatesurrender stuff & actually did some research into it. I hope you do a continuation along this storyline.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Waiting for more...

I can't wait to read about the upcoming matches and how they will turn out.

DrunksDrunksabout 18 years ago
had me hooked

Excllent story, it grabbed hold of me alright

hope there is more

cffreakcffreakover 17 years ago
Great content & Style - Less Stats & Rules

Thank you for this great story. NIce work.

My criticism (hopefully constructive) is to not have yards of text dedicated to the rules of the wrestling/fighting. It stopped the story in it's tracks and felt I was reading some legal brief or software license agreeement. If that stuff was important to the story, the weave it into the story.

The rest of the story moved nicely and was exciting.

Thanks for sharing this.

-CFFreak

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Fun Story

Good story spoilt by poor spelling (Where and were etc)

I agree with the person who thought the rules and regulations were too long and interupted the story.

Otherwise very good

aika092aika092over 14 years ago
Excellent

As an Ultimate Surrender fan I absolutely loved this, it was written well and was very sexy. I was hoping that there'd be more finger fucking during the wrestling, but oh well. It was still awesome.

KatieTayKatieTayover 12 years ago

would love to have this scenario continue

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