by Wet Miranda
Hi just read your brilliant story.Just keep em coming
lots more of the wrestling.and her rise to the top.
I liked that you had the ultimatesurrender stuff & actually did some research into it. I hope you do a continuation along this storyline.
I can't wait to read about the upcoming matches and how they will turn out.
Excllent story, it grabbed hold of me alright
hope there is more
Thank you for this great story. NIce work.
My criticism (hopefully constructive) is to not have yards of text dedicated to the rules of the wrestling/fighting. It stopped the story in it's tracks and felt I was reading some legal brief or software license agreeement. If that stuff was important to the story, the weave it into the story.
The rest of the story moved nicely and was exciting.
Thanks for sharing this.
-CFFreak
Good story spoilt by poor spelling (Where and were etc)
I agree with the person who thought the rules and regulations were too long and interupted the story.
Otherwise very good
As an Ultimate Surrender fan I absolutely loved this, it was written well and was very sexy. I was hoping that there'd be more finger fucking during the wrestling, but oh well. It was still awesome.