i thought the storyline about her being mistaken for katie was a bit weird but very origional. And the bedroom scene was a definate turn on!
That is a great great story, five stars all the way
Did I say outstanding?
The basic story was decent, and potentially very good. The execution needs work, though. Aside from the run-on sentences and occasionally awkward grammar, it felt rushed and unfinished. This story needs a longer setup and more attention to the interaction between characters both before and after the sex.
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