All Comments on 'Rancho Paloma Blanca Revisited'

Snr.

You have constructed a wonderfully vicious protagonist. His cold-blooded abduction and domination are breathtaking. Looking forward to more of the story.

Thanks!

EGO and head that is - decent writting - skills should improve with maturity.

Inspired by or inspirering more mexican kidnappers?

Last review seems to have been the musings of a moron with his own self-esteem issues. Hot story! Mas por favor!

Not as imaginative as the original story.

The dark themes of this stroy are normally too abrasive for my taste, wonder why I continued the read...got off on it wonderfully. Muchas Gracias Estaban!

That's all I have to say.

This is abuse, there was nothing sexy to enjoy…but the writing was technically good.