All Comments on 'Scavenger Hunt'

that was a very hot read, I can't wait to read more of your work!

JT JT JT ... this was SO HOT...you are a great story teller. And I already knew that your imagination was OUT OF THIS WORLD just from chat.

Not only was this lighthearted and exciting for me as a female...you gave me, and I am SURE a few others, some new ideas...

Keep up the good work...Dayuuuummmmmm...

* picks up my list and heads to the kitchen*

This story is AWESOME. I'm going to have to try the tennis ball.

Hellooooooooooooooo jt, After reading this I don't know when I will want to lose my virginty to a man. Great story jt. Keep up the good writing.

Good stuff, JT... I'm impressed with you writing from a girl's point of view. And I wonder how many female readers are going to soon hear that "swoosh" sound that you get when you open a fresh can of tennis balls.

Keep it up, JT... this story was very well told.

I read this story then asked questions.

I was thinking this is one HOT female.

Then I find out this author is a male. That being said, your writing shows your abilty to really get your message across and hold the readers interest.

Great job.

I agree with the other comments about you passing on a few ideas.

I know that was Shay I saw at the sporting goods dept at the mall, cleaned the shelf of tennis balls.

Scott_34

excellent style of writing, i really believed it was a woman writing until i saw the comments. have you had some course in 'creative' writing? ;)