by Rayanne
This story is just completely weird. I can't get over how absolutely odd it is!
I didn't hate it, but not as good as the other one you have written.
WTF??? She falls in love with the rapist!!? Oh, wait actually thats called Stockholm Syndrome, where the person gains a psychologicol dependency on their tormentor... avarage story in the end. 50.
Next time, take a moment to use the spell check feature on your computer. It is there for a reason.
Just too short. The captive needs to be teased much much more. Mabey add a secondary female rapist?
I enjoyed it. To some it made no sense, I guess based on the comments, but it did to me. By the end, I pictured that it was set up, a scene played out, not actually a rape, though in fantasy, even if it was, she could want it again.
And take your time. The errors were only overshadowed by the break neck speed of the action at the climax (not in a good way). Too many stories follow the "ice been raped, let's do it again" farce.