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by My Erotic Tale05/06/05

First times a charm!

excellent literary Art, a deep and open poem, like a ... hole lot of your witty write instilled, pearl of a poem, Alex

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by Jennifer C05/07/05

Liked

It alot. Loved the picture
and the flow of your words,
A fantastic first attempt
at illustrated poetry.
More pls.
~ J

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by Anonymous05/07/05

lovely combination.

An illustrated triolet. Both words and picture, perfect.

Tess

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by Angeline05/07/05

Lovely illustrated work

The triolet is simply worded but very effective--I particularly like the consent/innocence combination--and the photo is wonderful. Well done!

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by WickedEve05/07/05

this is really nice

The poem alone would not have been as appealing for me. But paired with the illustration, it works quite nicely.

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by Wanton Vixxxen05/09/05

For a first attempt...

this was better than best, Alex. Your combination of basic black shadow imagery backgrounding the simplistic; yet eloquent style of the triolet set the mood for a beautiful flow of verse. This was just lovely!

Vixxx

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by duddle14612/31/06

Powerful.

Deep, powerful and heartfelt. The triolet only made the lines stronger. The dark background helped convey the meaning.

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by Amyfriend01/31/07

Beautifully written...

with a very appropriate picture that makes it even stronger

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by LeBroz02/09/07

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Unexpectedly powerful for a triolet thanks to the background imagery.

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