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First times a charm!
excellent literary Art, a deep and open poem, like a ... hole lot of your witty write instilled, pearl of a poem, Alex
Liked
It alot. Loved the picture
and the flow of your words,
A fantastic first attempt
at illustrated poetry.
More pls.
~ J
lovely combination.
An illustrated triolet. Both words and picture, perfect.
Tess
Lovely illustrated work
The triolet is simply worded but very effective--I particularly like the consent/innocence combination--and the photo is wonderful. Well done!
this is really nice
The poem alone would not have been as appealing for me. But paired with the illustration, it works quite nicely.
For a first attempt...
this was better than best, Alex. Your combination of basic black shadow imagery backgrounding the simplistic; yet eloquent style of the triolet set the mood for a beautiful flow of verse. This was just lovely!
Vixxx
Powerful.
Deep, powerful and heartfelt. The triolet only made the lines stronger. The dark background helped convey the meaning.
Beautifully written...
with a very appropriate picture that makes it even stronger
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Unexpectedly powerful for a triolet thanks to the background imagery.
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