All Comments on 'Careful What You Bet On Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great Story

This is turning into a great series. The story is similar to one which began late last year by a different author who just dropped the story. Glad to see this author is sticking with it and developing an interesting story. Will be glad to see the next installments.

FenzigFenzigalmost 19 years ago
Thank You!

This series is fantastic. I can't wait for chapter 5. Keep up the good work (you've already done a good job of keeping me up)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
WOW

WOW

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
HOT

Great job! Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Come Back!!!

Please keep writing. Finish the story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
It's not enough!

Too good to be just a story. Let's finish the story and move on to the movie.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Finish please?

This is an awesome story but I want to read the conclusion.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
On other hand,do NOT finish !!

There is enough crap on this site already !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Please finish this story...it has been a tremendous read thus far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

This story was dated 2005, 6 years ago.

Was Chapter 05 ever written.

It's a great story and I particularly like the 3 minute submission idea. I wonder would a male hold up for 3 minutes in mixed wrestling?

Please finish the story!

John

GoodhueGoodhueover 8 years ago
Finish the Damn Thing!

10 years have passed and still NO Chapter 5? Conclusion?!

Had a good story going,with lots of positive feedback. What happened,the writer died? WTF

(Whenever Wendy is mentioned I picture Carla and Ashley as Diane (with much bigger tits!) from the TV show Taxi)

26thNC26thNCabout 3 years ago
Sixteen years now

Pretty sure this POS is dead in the water. Great news.

Anonymous
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