All Comments on 'Still Pond'

by wildsweetone

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 19 years ago
Yes!

Kudos to author and illistrator

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
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Beautiful illustration

Beautiful Poem.

~ J

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Evocative

Evocative and mood inducing. Beautiful work to contemplate.

b'brig

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Syn said it

Kudos.

Tess

AngelineAngelinealmost 19 years ago
Both illustration and poem are lovely

though I like the poem in and of itself more--I think a larger font and white lettering would make it just perfect--pull the piece together more. I know this was your first effort though and with your poetic talents, you'll just keep getting better. ;)

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 19 years ago
the poem is quite good

as well at the image. I'd love to see the photo in black and white and the font a bit more subdued.

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailalmost 19 years ago
mentioned

your poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the journey

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
Nice...

images of tranquility.

tolyktolykalmost 19 years ago
Honoured...

to see one of my favorite photos come to life with your beautiful words. Keep up the good work :)

damppantiesdamppantiesalmost 19 years ago
Beautiful...

The photograph as well as the poem. I especially loved the last line. A little suggestion though, the yellow font does not really go well with me, perhaps a less obvious colour...?

-DP.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
water

Anyone who has ever spent time in the quiet of a sleepy pond can appreciate the beautiful picture accompanying this rendering. Both compliment each other nicely.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Enjoyed the feel of your words over the view behind them.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
FEEDING THE ALGAE

for others to imbibe. TK U MLJ LV NV

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